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Stepbrother Fallen eBook Aya Fukunishi

I gave this one 3 stars. I teetered back and forth from 3 or 4 stars. It was written ok. I liked the story line. I just think a lot of detail was left out. 1. The intimacy scenes were lacking. There were 2 scenes. Not that I have to have them in a book I read but if you're going to write it in....write it in. Don't gloss over it. Makes it look like u didn't want to write them in but felt like that's what readers wanted or u don't know how to. 2. After the first intimacy scene, you go a few pages over and the guy is being carted off to jail for 3 years. Poof. Gone. They have no contact. After that plays out you jump 7 years. SEVEN YEARS. You get snippets of her backstory. What she's been doing. How she's quit school to travel in Mongolia. Then comes back and writes a book about it. OK. And of course you know what going to happen from here. She's doing a book signing and HE, Rafe, shows up. They hook up. (intimacy scene 2). Glossed over. Then she skips out on talk show and they spend the next 2 years in another country living in the rough, it seems. I don't know. I hate to be harsh and maybe this was 3.5 star worthy read. I just struggled with the holes and poorly written intimacy scenes. I felt like we were trying to cram as much as we could in just so many pages. Story had potential but just fell short for me.


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Stepbrother Fallen eBook Aya Fukunishi Reviews

Fast paced book. Rafe comes to live with his dad he has never met after his mom dies and he has gotten into to much trouble. Maddy is instantly attracted to him. Race gets sent to jail. Seven years later they meet again. HEA
This story had some real potential, however there were too many grammar errors, and there were parts of the story where maddy would be speaking, then it cuts right into narration, also things just moved too quickly, no background.. Ect.. Happy reading )
I been having this series for a while, and now is when I decided to read it and I'm so glad that I did. I felt in love with this series from the first page to the last one, love the characters and love how the series end it.
I wouldn't consider this book to be a must read, but its definitely a good read. I expected dit to be the typical step brother story but tia one had a twist. I never anticipated the turn of events that occurred, which is why I gave it 4 stars.
I fell in love with the Step Brother where art thou books. My only complaint had been the fact it was in two books and being a cliffhanger. When I saw the Step brother Fallen book I got excited and bought it. I'm so glad I did. She has a beauty and passion in her writing. That we just don't always see anymore. This story has cost me sleep and lead me by my nose. I love this book and I would recommend it to anyone we is ready for something different. This is a beautiful story can't wait to see what she comes up with next.
My parents have never been divorced, my brother is blood related and a tad bit annoying even in his adult life...so I have never really been interested in books about step-siblings falling for eachother. However, this quick read had me wondering what if...

Ok readers, think back to that jerk in high school or middle school who made your life a living hell. Now imagine he lives down the hall from you? What would you do? Did you find him sexy when he was making your life miserable? Who are we kidding...of course you found him sexy! What would you do if he made your life miserable only to save you from that misery in the same night? Would you stand up for him when he needed it the most? Would your hidden love for him continue to grow or dissipate? Would you tell him your deepest secrets? Would you ________ after he shows up at _______________, and says __________________, but your mother says __________? I don't know about you, but heck yes!!!!!! Forget mom and get your Stepbrother on girl! I know I would!
I don't really know where to start, I guess for one the spelling could have been doubled checked before sold. I like the concept of the story but it's definitely not worth that much money wish I could get mine back. I gave it 2stars because I thought the story it's self was good thought maybe once he went to jail that they would stay in touch or at least touch base on things they talked about as teens when they got back together. Over all I would say don't waist your money the spelling errors are enough to not read
I gave this one 3 stars. I teetered back and forth from 3 or 4 stars. It was written ok. I liked the story line. I just think a lot of detail was left out. 1. The intimacy scenes were lacking. There were 2 scenes. Not that I have to have them in a book I read but if you're going to write it in....write it in. Don't gloss over it. Makes it look like u didn't want to write them in but felt like that's what readers wanted or u don't know how to. 2. After the first intimacy scene, you go a few pages over and the guy is being carted off to jail for 3 years. Poof. Gone. They have no contact. After that plays out you jump 7 years. SEVEN YEARS. You get snippets of her backstory. What she's been doing. How she's quit school to travel in Mongolia. Then comes back and writes a book about it. OK. And of course you know what going to happen from here. She's doing a book signing and HE, Rafe, shows up. They hook up. (intimacy scene 2). Glossed over. Then she skips out on talk show and they spend the next 2 years in another country living in the rough, it seems. I don't know. I hate to be harsh and maybe this was 3.5 star worthy read. I just struggled with the holes and poorly written intimacy scenes. I felt like we were trying to cram as much as we could in just so many pages. Story had potential but just fell short for me.